7k of Superfluous Fluff Eliminated

I discussed the whole situation with Superfluous Fluff in Dana of the Whispering Wood earlier. Well I finally finished the edits, and it's 7000 words shorter after I removed phrases and paragraphs that add nothing whatsoever to the plot. Go me!

That puts Dana at a whopping 115k.

Now I'm on to do exactly the opposite to Arianna Penndragon. I left things out of that one that need to be there. I don't know why I just assume that you all know all about the vampires in my world. How are you going to know if I don't tell you?

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